Wednesday, 8 October 2014

My Holiday reading By Tyler

Rewrite the Ending If you could rewrite the ending of the story what would happen? Write a paragraph explaining what you think should have happened. Post it onto your blog with the following information. - Title - Author - Type of Book - Why your ending is better Slide The Corner Fleur Beale Novel Old one I reckon i’d slid around the corner and now I was off up the straight. New One When we shot around the bend just missing the edge going up the narrow track. I think my new ending is better because I am using more powerful words and making it more interesting.

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