Wednesday, 8 October 2014
My Holiday reading By Tyler
Rewrite the Ending
If you could rewrite the ending of the story what would happen? Write a paragraph explaining what you think should have happened.
Post it onto your blog with the following information.
- Title
- Author
- Type of Book
- Why your ending is better
Slide The Corner
Fleur Beale
Novel
Old one
I reckon i’d slid around the corner and now I was off up the straight.
New One
When we shot around the bend just missing the edge going up the narrow track.
I think my new ending is better because I am using more powerful words and making it more interesting.
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